بِسْمِ اللهِ الرَحْمَنِ الرَّحِيم

I`ll write some centenses , they have some mistakes

You sould to correct them

Ok

lets start :_

1/ yester day I were in the mall

2/ When Fatemal come to my house I was cleaned the room

3/How many sisters did you have!

4/When does you bought the i phone?

5/I have 3 brother

Now i want to see many comments

جات في بالي فكرة إني أكتب لكم جمل والمطلوب منكم تصليح الأغلاط الا فيها ((اعتبروها مسابقة))

خمس جمل يحتوون على أغلاط ,, ان شاء الله أشوف تعقيبات واجد وتنافس

Good luck

Salam...

1/yesterday I were in the mall
2/When Fatima come to my house I were cleaning the room

3/How many sisters do you have!

4/When did you buy the i phone?

5/I have three brothers

1/ yester day I were in the mall
yesterday i was in the mall

2/ When Fatemal come to my house I was cleaned the room
When Fatimah came to my house i was cleaning the room

3/How many sisters did you have!
How many sisters do you have

4/When does you bought the i phone?
When did you buy the iphone

5/I have 3 brother
I have three brothers

yes that is right I was in the mall ...

(were for the plural not for single)

that is great

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة غلا قلبي

1/ yester day I were in the mall

yesterday i was in the mall

True

But (i) you should to write it with capetal
Like this >>I

2/ When Fatemal come to my house I was cleaned the room
When Fatimah came to my house i was
cleaning the room

Also here true but the i capetal >>I

3/How many sisters did you have!
How many sisters do you have

You gorgot the qyestion mark>>? this one

4/When does you bought the i phone?
When did you buy the iphone

Always you forgot this? Qwestion mark


5/I have 3 brother

I have three brothers

But it is great you are perfect student

don`t forget the i always comes capital I

don`t forget (?) in the end of question

Good luck

So I like your comment so much

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة مدن حسن الميرزا

1/yesterday I were in the mall
>>Was not were

2/When Fatima come to my house I were cleaning the room

Also here you forgot was > it comes with I

Also the first section it is in the past because that you should to say Came not come

3/How many sisters do you have!
You forgot the question mark here

4/When did you buy the i phone?
True

5/I have three brothers

True

Thanks for your answer

Just don`t forget after I >>was not were

amm also don`t forget the question mark

After the qwestion

Salam...

Good job


1/ yester day I were in the mall

yesterday I was in the mall

2/ When Fatemal come to my house I was cleaned the room

When Fatimah came to my house I was cleaning the room

3/How many sisters did you have!

How many sisters do you have ?

4/When does you bought the i phone?

When did you buy the i phone ?

5/I have 3 brother

I have 3 brothers


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mo 23daam efraj

It is a really good practice , all of us, we have tried to correct the mistake.
Let me show you the site that helps everybody in finding the mistake and
correct it.



http://www.whitesmoke.com/free-onlin...0brother%20%20

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة مدن حسن الميرزا

It is a really good practice , all of us, we have tried to correct the mistake.
Let me show you the site that helps everybody in finding the mistake and
correct it.



http://www.whitesmoke.com/free-onlin...0brother%20%20

Thanks alot Mr.Midan

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Jenan

Good job


1/ yester day I were in the mall

yesterday I was in the mall

2/ When Fatemal come to my house I was cleaned the room

When Fatimah came to my house I was cleaning the room

3/How many sisters did you have!

How many sisters do you have ?

4/When does you bought the i phone?

When did you buy the i phone ?

5/I have 3 brother

I have 3 brothers


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mo 23daam efraj

Perfect perfect student

Go ahead ,, thanks alot

>>Efraaj Lo0ol

highly welcome

1/ yester day I were in the mall

Correct: Yesterday, I was in the mall.


2/ When Fatemal come to my house I was cleaned the room

Correct: When Fatima came to my house, I was cleaning the room.

3/How many sisters did you have!

Correct: How many sisters do you have?


4/When does you bought the i phone?

Correct: When did you buy the iPhone?


5/I have 3 brother

Correct: I have three brothers.


All the best!

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة العـميد

1/ yester day I were in the mall

Correct: Yesterday, I was in the mall.


2/ When Fatemal come to my house I was cleaned the room

Correct: When Fatima came to my house, I was cleaning the room.

3/How many sisters did you have!

Correct: How many sisters do you have?


4/When does you bought the i phone?

Correct: When did you buy the iPhone?


5/I have 3 brother

Correct: I have three brothers.


All the best!

perfect work < thanks alot